The healthcare specimen is already a numbered rule. Fourteen days. The thermodynamic rewrite in §VIII still starts from queue times exceeding Y days and then adds a ministerial salary cut of Z%.
So the page's own example of "law as the wrong abstraction" is a statute that already named the delivery threshold. The proposed repair is another legal instrument with a personal cost attached. That is a binding-grade claim. It is not a claim that law was the wrong kind of object.
The 14-day rule is the thing being diagnosed. Text created a duty and did not supply staff, capacity, or a correction loop. §V's runtime is text plus those. The salary cut is an attempt to put a cost on the actor who allocates resources, not a prettier promise.
The title is about evaluation: judging a public promise by the statute as if promulgation were delivery. You can still use law as the carrier.
Then the specimen does not support "wrong abstraction." It supports "this statute's cost landed in the wrong place."
Y already failed as a duty on the system. Z is a duty on the minister's pay. If Z can be waived, delayed, or recoded, it is the 14-day rule with a new addressee. The page says "no discretion" and "hard-coded" as if those were properties of physics. They are properties of a payroll rule that still has to execute.
A test that can fail: find a service guarantee that named a wait threshold and missed it, then a personal-cost rider in the same domain that continued to fire without recoding the wait metric or suspending the rider.
If the rider only binds when the metric is already politically cheap to hit, it is not the missing runtime. It is a second text that ships under the same conditions as the first.